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:icontwilightshooter:
i thank you for allowing a stranger like me to critique your work, i will be completly honest with my opinion on the image. first off, i really like the way the line quality pops in the entire composition. my only flaw is the arms on your character, they are oddly proportionate. it seems as though you were going for a realistic feel while keeping to it's cartoony origin. you definitely have your own original character which is really good. i feel as though text almost does the image justice but falls short of it's mark because of the imbalance with the x's. if both x's were lower case it would have really set the k and v appart as to imply your username. one more thing on the text, it may just be me, but i do believe that a nice border around the text would have made it stand out from the image. a nice border would isolate both and visually balance the entire composition. the color scheme work well though i feel as though the hard shades around the character were just randomly set. it doesn't seem to sit well with the colors in which they are for. overall this is pretty good and just minor mishaps hold it down, other than that, you did a great job. keep it up X]
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Tesuai Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much! I didn't even notice the mistake! Please, if you would, I'd love it if you'd made critiques for ALL my pictures, I love to hear what everyone has to say and of course, I want to hear my flaws. Once again, Thank you so much!
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TwilightShooter Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
i would if i had the time, i am pretty busy as well but i'll try to do what i can if you send it my way. i'm glad you liked it, just learn and keep moving, thank you for having me XD
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Tesuai Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^7^
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